Entering #DVpit? Advice + Free Critiques

Let's talk twitter pitching events! Specifically, #DVpit, the twitter event created by agent Beth Phelan to support diverse authors and their stories. You can check out her website here for official guidelines, resources, and interviews. (My interview with Beth and Molly is here!). 

Since I had such a great outcome with #DVpit when I participated in April, I thought I'd share a little advice and offer some free critiques for the folks participating in October!